Darkness sheds light, eyes tight til the lid on this life is tight and I am no more
No longer pondering what it once existed for
Yet the questions rise and expand with the distance, searching through stars and the heavens and beyond…the soul sours
Towards the light years of the life force in which it is in hopes of being absorbed
What am I, did I ever exist, when I was ever so shape-shifting
Even now I ponder what is pending, what I am facing, am I dead or finally living
Free from the past and the yearning of such cause I’m conscious of being but not the being that once existed
Conscious, not logical or emotional cause when my heart and brain vanished, thoughts and feelings did with it
Yet I exist, though I no longer have my 5 senses
Yet conscious of love, fear, and the will to live rather than diminish
Into a state of unconsciousness some define as non-existence
Welcoming the unknown rather than approach it with resistance
Dulled the conscious of I, that was composed and compromised for bits and pieces of anothers' interpretation
Shined light on the darkness and lived a life searching for the truth, patiently waiting
On the revelation, revealing that there could only be one
One conscience, one master, one creator and many servants or slaves to the evil force that would rather have none
Would rather seek, kill, and destroy rather then bow down to the being from which it existed
Seeking purpose in living by attempting to live as gods, when living was the purpose, how could we have missed it
This evil force manipulated mankind out of vanity, causing mankind in turn to be just as vain
Parasites feasting of the flesh and soul like syphilis, driving men and women insane
Destroying such a beautiful creation, using the creators name in vain
Unconscious and emotional, but I could feel all the pain, and as though a weight was lifted
Darkness shed light, eyes tight like the lid on this life, death was the gateway to life, and I didn’t resist
15 comments:
THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL!
That was DEEP!
FAV LINE: Conscious, not logical or emotional cause when my heart and brain vanished, thoughts and feelings did with it...
Follow Me...
Damn this was deep.
I loved this post &
the pic is dope. Lighting
is on point!
Very interesting piece and use of imagery. I like the way you flipped a hip hop cadence while writing the lines.
Jaycee
BTW:I so cannot find you on C.J's myspace anymore :(
unconscious and emotional but I could feel all the pain, I like this alot
hello dahling. =]
& this was very well written.
Let me find out...too much for me!!!!! Loves it!!!:0
I am blown away...beautiful and deep and dark all at the same time
True talent
1st time here, will be back too
awh; that was deep. i like!!
good...no GREAT stuff. I definitely like it.
WOW! That was too deep. Great words. Favorite line is this:
"Shined light on the darkness and lived a life searching for the truth, patiently waiting"
so poetic
"Seeking purpose in living by attempting to live as gods, when living was the purpose, how could we have missed it"
dope ass line. I read it like 6 times n got a different feeling each time I did.
very lovely.
=]
WOOOOOOWWWW
I SEE U!
your just on your writing tip over there missy!
imissu!
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